Here
I am back blogging in 2014. Last ‘term’ (once a teacher, always a teacher!) I
was trying to get my head round the concept of theatre that is ‘cutting edge’
and which ‘breaks barriers’ and the truth is, despite seeing quite a few plays,
I couldn’t find anything that really and truly did it for me. I haven’t given
up and have visits planned which you can be sure I will tell you about. Also,
please (and here’s a test to see if anyone is actually reading this!) tell me
what you think is cutting edge and I’ll see if I agree. Anyway, in the meantime
I thought it only fair to put myself and The Rudes on the line and tell you
about how we make plays. I intend therefore over the next few months to open up
the murky world of my brain and tell you what is going on as I write our summer
play. So here goes!
Back
in September the word ‘Macbird’ came into my head (I don’t know where from; I
had definitely not heard it before. See below) with the idea that it might be
fun to write a version of Macbeth set in the bird world. I vaguely knew what it
was about. I subsequently wrote this.
“It’s
1940 in the Sussex village of Jevington. George, a retired mechanic, cheerfully
tends his vegetables (for the war effort) when his wife, Lil, comes out with a
cup of tea, a piece of delicious upside-down cake, and… a letter from The War
Office. ‘What’s this?’ he says. ‘What’s this?’ Above in a cotton wool sky
bombers set out across the channel. But
clouds are menacing, bubbling up like ink blots above the Downs. Magpies
gather, hopping in a circle on their twiggy legs. ‘What’s this?’ they cackle.
‘What’s this?’ And then, with clattering wings, they seem to screech, ‘Peck out
his eyes! Peck out his eyes!’ But it’s not to George they croak. A raven,
black, and sleek as silk, lands nearby on a branch, head held high and wings
outstretched, bouncing like a tight-rope walker. ‘Peck out his eyes! Peck out
his eyes!’ the magpies call, lowering their bodies subserviently. ‘Your time
has come, Macbird,’ they whisper. ‘Listen to the wind! Peck out… his eyes!’ Amidst
the cabbages, broccoli and comic absurdity, a dark and menacing intrigue
simmers as a power struggle breaks out amongst the birds.”
At
this point I didn’t really know much more of the story than this.
Then…disaster! Someone told me that there was another play called ‘Macbird’, an
obscure 60’s American play about Lyndon B Johnson. His wife was called ‘Bird’.
My story was clearly different and I couldn’t get ‘Macbird’ out of my head, so
someone suggested ‘Macbyrd’. A door opened. This was the correct spelling. Like
‘wytch’ and ‘wyerd’ it felt ancient. Ango-Saxon. And the characters started
spilling out. Macbyrd, Wormwood, Cygnus, Pen, Thorn, Yewberrry, Nightshade, and
so on – and then the story followed easily. Once they are named, they are alive.
The life is in the name. Creatures from another world. And the story was just
what they did. I then created a human time context, one of my favourite years,
1940, and I created humans to go with them, George Beeskep, a retired mechanic,
Lil Beeskep, his wife, Cedric Lilywhite, a little man in a suit with a
briefcase from the War Office up in London, and others.
I
haven’t started writing yet. That’s not how I do it. I have to create all the
pieces first (like a puzzle) in random order and then in a huge flurry of
activity with cards stuck all over the wall I put it together in six weeks. I
will tell you about it as I go along. At the moment I’m collecting words,
phrases, poems, songs, gags, images, visions – and music. Musical phrases
suggest events, so I collect them on my guitar (or this time round the piano).
And I know now mainly what it is about. I can tell you this much.
It’s
about the way the village’s life is disrupted when The War Office takes over a
field and builds an airfield. But, while the human world provides a context,
the main story sees the events from the birds’ point of view that live in the
valley. Macbyrd is a raven, a minor clerk who has risen to become mayor of
Aviana through force of character & political nous. He is content to defer
to the Leader, Cygnus, an effete and over-refined swan, who with his partner,
Pen, luxuriate in their own wealth, beauty and established status. But when
magpies predict that ‘his time has come’ and that darker, cleverer, more
powerful birds will rule the sky, provoked by his bitter and ambitious wife,
Wormwood, he begins to think the unthinkable. Then when the human world
intervenes and the pond is ripped out by machines he is convinced that he is
destined to be Leader and kills the swan in a titanic battle. When Cygnus’ body
is found in a ditch we see the events from the human point of view as the local
bobby, PC ‘Dog’ Wood, investigates. The play is on one level a comedy of
manners in that it reflects the idiosyncrasies of village life and wider
society.
But,
like all our adult plays, it is intended to provoke thought. Macbyrd feels
obliged to preserve the status quo and observe moral values, but the feeling
that he is a better, more capable, more worthy being gradually overwhelms him
and makes him resentful of the fact that Cygnus is only there because of wealth
and traditional, social and hierarchical structures – and the rightness of his
case becomes greater in his mind than the wrongness of the act needed to change
things.
More next week!